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Frail Words Collapse by Nick Rose

Here are three different versions of the same poem

 

“Frail Words Collapse” (FINAL)

2.50 and its double times 6.

Hours unending.

Blue and green connect, collide, crash.

Insignificant moments

Undoing worlds.

Gone in an instant.

Don’t say a word.

 

“Frail Words Collapse” (sentence form)

Rolling through 2.50 and its double 6 times in the unending hours when blue and green connect, collide, crash, when insignificant moments undo worlds. Saying nothing on cold, concrete treks before everything is gone in an instant. The beginning.

 

“Frail Words Collapse” (original)

Details the same.

Words inadequate.

2.50 and its double times 6.

Hours unending.

Blue and green

Connect, collide, crash.

Insignificant moments

Undoing worlds.

Don’t say a word.

Gone in an instant.

The beginning.

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